- The video (posted above)
- People generally liked my idea according to the feedback from last time. They liked how I was clear in planning out the app's goals as well as having a detailed explanation and a specific target market. The general feedback was that it was well-thought out and creative, for which I am grateful for.
- This time around, the idea and pitch is different, for a creation of a different app, explained in the video above. I tried to stay consistent with the feedback and my goals were to have a clear outline of the app's goals, detailed reasoning of why it would work, incentivizing methods, and a speficic target method.
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3 (Week 10)
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Hello Jary, I think that you did a good job reflecting on the feedback that was given to you in your last elevator pitch. You can tell that you came in knowing exactly what you were going to say and did a good job of explaining your app and the benefits that it can offer. I also changed my pitch a lot based on the feedback good work overall.
ReplyDeleteHi Jary,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your presentation on this one. It definitely seemed like you knew what you were talking about the whole time, and were confident enough in the idea to present it effectively. I think that this is one of the most important aspects of giving a good presentation. I also thought that your overall outline of your goals was very effective in conveying your message in an understandable way.
Here's a link to my presentation. http://natehooper.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Jery!
ReplyDeleteI really like your attitude. I feel you have the potential and skills to be an excellent entrepreneur.You really know what you are going because you feedback is well stablished.I'm also doing an app ;therefore I fully understand you.this is the link to my blog :)http://ndajbura.blogspot.com/