- The Pitch
(video above) - Reflection
- I had very good feedback for my elevator pitch from the first time. People who commented genuinely liked my idea of promoting healthy eating for students. They noticed my passion for this idea, and I'm glad I was able to convey it through the video.
- What I Changed
- I did not change much to my elevator pitch this time around, except for adding additional places to eat that the app can partner with.
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 2 (Week 7)
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I like your opportunity. I believe that the pitch is to long and detailed. The pitch is meant to get people interested to the opportunity, after that you can sit down with interested parties and go into more detail. One seems to lose interest after a certain amount of time. The assignment did ask for 60 seconds.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with your semester,
-Dallin
Take a look at my post as well. http://dallinj.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I actually had a similar concept idea. I really enjoyed seeing how we took different approaches. I learned a lot! I would really like to have an app that is easily accessible. I am interested to learn more about your idea. I think college students would enjoy having an app if they choose to eat healthy because we are usually on our phones all of the time. Great idea! Feel free to check out my blog post: http://rachelecarter.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHi Jary, immediately I would like to say that I absolutely love this idea and I think we need more people like you in today's fat world. I know when I started college I literately gained 20-30 pounds. Thankfully, I was finally able to get rid of all of it, but with your app it would've been a lot easier. I also think the points system is genius and a lot of restaurants would love a partnership like this. I also make a point to say something negative, but I love your idea so much that I can't so I'll just say a little more energy in your videos can go a long way. Keep up the great work and check out my blog at http://zanesufblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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